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fredag 25 november 2011

Own ghost story

Once  upon a time there was a house that was far out in the woods. Children from the whole world knew that the house was haunted, except for two twins who just moved to Canada from Great Britain.

It was an ordinary day at school, two new students began in Class 6A, they were twins. One day, a friend named Ronny asked the twins if they wanted to come home to him, of course the twins said and the twins went home with Ronny, Ronny said that they could take a shortcut through the woods. Ronny knew about the haunted house, but took the twins to the house to show them. He did not say the house was haunted. He told the twins to go in and retrieve a ball he accidentally throw in there last summer. The twins went in to the house, they heard a voice calld ’‘What are you two doing in my house?’’ The twins got scared and turned around to go out, one of them got caught with his foot to the floor. ’‘You have to go out of this house, ruunn!!!’‘  Justin said(One of the twin) Charlie did what Justin told him to do, so Charlie got out from the house and he wasen’t hurt.
-Were is Justin?Ronny asked.
-I don’t know, we heard a voice and then Justin stucked into the floor? How do we get him out?
-Did you heard a voice??? Ronny said.
-Yes, why? Is it dangerouse? I asked.
-Oh my god, we have to get away!
-No, i can’t leave Justin in there! You have to get him out!
Ronny went in to the house and he diden’t find Justin anywere? Were is he? Ronny came out from the house and he saw Justin standing right next to Charlie.
-Ther you are Justin, we got scared! Ronny said.
-What do you talking about?I asked Ronny.
-Ya, he standing right next to you! can’t you see him?
-Haha, no? Are you crazy?You may have seen a ghost, but not Justin, right? Charlie said.
-Oh my god, Justin is dead!

The end.

2 kommentarer:

  1. You have written a scary story with words connected to the senses, this makes it even more spooky. The end is a bit mysterious.

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  2. Min inträdesbiljett
    Mål:Skriva en läskig historia med bra stavning.
    Detta är jag nöjd med:Att den blev så läskig.
    Såhär vill jag jobba vidare:Bli bättre på att stava.

    SvaraRadera